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davo499 · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 5:58 am

definatly wrong, but hey i gave it a shot

Quote:

consider me an object
free of any infliction
free of all conditions
free of emission
yeah

(something in here..)

never forward
yeah inside your (..est???)
one feeling like your sucking
(down the palm???)
you keep coming at us

(with me im an outkast???)
but i am an asylum
calling on assistance
breathing in emission

(something in here..)

coming closer
(only???) im not an asylum
im shooting forward
but like im not
but i am not
but i am (something)

yeah im just sitting aside them
and they're out of (???)
come on, any time now (???)

yeah im running, (not stop at all??)
yeah like there's something near
that's going to get harder

come in my world
right inside my place
yeah like there's something
(core you big harger????....)

Quote:

consider me an object
free of any infliction
free of all conditions
free of (emission/ambitions)

I've been sittin' upside down
and then I will swing
for all eternity

never forward
(yes i know it) (i can still hear that ..est???)
oh feeling like
its something i never thought you'd be a part of??

(Bring me to a doctor???)
maybe an asylum?
calling on assistance
breathing amunition

feeling righteous
yeah that's not forward
feeling like there's
something i never thought you'd be part of

coming forward
yeah forwards, backwards
coming closer

hang on
sail on
i'm feeling forward
but backing off
falling down

yeah ive been sitting upside down
and then i will slip
for all eternity

Feeling Righteous
yeah that's not forward
feeling like there's something that you'll never be part of

going forwards
yeah upside, downwards
feeling like there's something i never thought you'd be part of

thats what i hear now

worshiper · **Joined:** Sun Oct 17, 2004 9:30 pm **Posts:** 204

I'll try.. using yours as a base

Quote:

consider me an object
free of any inflation
free of all conditions
free of emission

Yeah, I've been sitting upside down.
and there I will stay.
for all eternity.

never forward
yes I know it
Oh feeling like your sucking
(down the palm???)
you've been part of

(with me I'm a backrub:)???)
but i am an asylum
calling on assistance
breathing in emission

Feeling (righteous?)
yeah lets go forward
oh feeling like there's something
down the core/door you've been part of??

coming forward
yeah, forwards backward
coming closer

(only???) im not an asylum
im shooting forward
but like im not
falling down
but i am (something)

*guitar solo*

yeah i've been sitting upside down
and there I will stay
for all eternity..

feeling (something)
yeah lets go forward
feeling like there's something
down the (core/door?) you've been part of

comin forward
yeah, upsidedownwards
feeling like there's something
down the ("floor" maybe?) you've been part of.

bettatest · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 6:36 am

some additions i seem to here
(especially on the last chorus it sounds like "sway")

consider me an object
free of any infliction
free of all conditions
free of emission
yeah

yeah i've been sittin
i'm upside down
and there i will sway
for all eternity

never forward
yeah inside your head
i'm feeling lucky
something i never thought
to be part of

(with me im an outkast???)
but i am an asylum
calling on assistance
breathing in emission

(something in here..)
I'm feelin like an outkast
something i never thought
to be part of

coming forward
...backward..
coming closer

(only???) im not an asylum
im shooting forward
but like im not
but i am not
but i am (something)

yeah i've been sittin
i'm upside down
and there i will sway
for all eternity

???
???
i'm feeling lucky
something i never thought
to be part of

???
???
i'm feeling lucky
something i never thought
to be part of

jwran · **Joined:** Sun Oct 17, 2004 4:47 pm **Posts:** 60

Thanks!
Just what i came here to find. You guys rock!
This song reminds me of SOLAT-vs/Vitaolgy era PJ. incredible.

hetved0 · **Joined:** Mon Oct 18, 2004 2:49 am **Posts:** 355

sounds like cant explain lyric wise. not in meaning, but that they make no sense hehe.

they're probably much different than we're hearing. we just havent listened to a clear studio version or official bootleg to obsess over lyrical corrections.

bettatest · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 6:38 am

worshiper wrote:

I'll try.. using yours as a base

your's definetly makes more sense ... ;-)

worshiper · **Joined:** Sun Oct 17, 2004 9:30 pm **Posts:** 204

davo499, I think your second try around is the closest we've got so far, especially the line, "feeling like theres something I never thought you'd be part of."

The song makes me think of a pair of loaded dice, but sung from the perspective of the side that always lands upside down.. Like the whole system is fucked up against you.. I can't wait until the album version.

davo499 · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 6:45 am

worshiper wrote:

davo499, I think your second try around is the closest we've got so far, especially the line, "feeling like theres something I never thought you'd be part of."

woo thanx, altho the people at synergy have been helping

bettatest · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 6:48 am

sway instead swing might be..

davo499 · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 7:12 am

hmm what about the chords
i know the intro is D A D, D A B

kutfut · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 7:15 am

ha, i went right to my guitar too. sounds like D A D, D A Em to me

davo499 · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 7:18 am

im just playing power chords, and my ears not musiclly trained at all
but i stick with b tho

lol wats are your thoughts on the verse

kutfut · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 7:27 am

verse

g---------98-----
d-9- 999 988---
a-9- 999 768---
E-7- 777 ---6---

kutfut · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 7:29 am

haha, yeah, i'm far from musically trained myself, but oh well

how bout this for the chorus

D A D, D A Em, D A D, then

d--4-- -5-
a--4-- -5-
E--2-- -3-

kutfut · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 7:44 am

after the second chorus

d--4-- --5-- --7--
a--4-- --5-- --7--
E--2-- --3-- --5--

d--2-- --4-- --5--
a--2-- --4-- --5-- ------D
E--0-- --2-- --3--

thats pretty much it i guess. you guys can listen for the timing and shit. easy but fun to play. of course, i'm sure i'm a little off, oversimplified or something.

kutfut · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 7:57 am

oh, and that one little weird part after the first chorus
e----------------------------------------
b----------------------------------------
g-----------------------------------10--
d---9-----9----8--------9-----9--------
a------9--------------------9-----------
E----------------------------------------

Alive · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 8:09 am

Now that the live mp3 is available for download. I feel that me might be able to discuss it here. What do you think about it?

Personally, I think it is a great track. It took about three listens for me to really enjoy it. It reminds me of Spin the Black Circle for some reason. Overall, its a great song and I hope the rest of the cd is just as good.

mca47 · **Joined:** Sun Oct 17, 2004 10:08 pm **Posts:** 113

i too think it's a good song.
can't wait to here the studio version!!

bamonator · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 8:20 am

ya i give it a thumbs up

last|soldier · **Posted:** Mon Mar 21, 2005 8:22 am

Took me a number of listens to like it, but it's walloping my arse right now. I liked the studio version of I am Mine so much more than the original debut so hoepfully it will be a similar improvement.

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