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iceagecoming wrote:
I've noticed a few but can't really think of any at the moment.
"Me you wouldn't recall"from Small Town always sounds...odd. But the delivery is amazing so it balances out =)
that one never bothered me. The line ike pointed to jumped out at me with WWS right away (still does). But McParadigm says that it is gramatically correct and who am I to argue?
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stip wrote:
iceagecoming wrote:
I've noticed a few but can't really think of any at the moment.
"Me you wouldn't recall"from Small Town always sounds...odd. But the delivery is amazing so it balances out =)
that one never bothered me. The line ike pointed to jumped out at me with WWS right away (still does). But McParadigm says that it is gramatically correct and who am I to argue?
Aren't small departures from correct grammar allowed in poems? Poets and lyricists use it to fit metrics.
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Joined: Tue Nov 30, 2004 4:02 am Posts: 44183 Location: New York Gender: Male
Mine wrote:
stip wrote:
iceagecoming wrote:
I've noticed a few but can't really think of any at the moment.
"Me you wouldn't recall"from Small Town always sounds...odd. But the delivery is amazing so it balances out =)
that one never bothered me. The line ike pointed to jumped out at me with WWS right away (still does). But McParadigm says that it is gramatically correct and who am I to argue?
Aren't small departures from correct grammar allowed in poems? Poets and lyricists use it to fit metrics.
well I'm not grading his grammar. I just don't care for how it sounds. It's awkward
_________________ "Better the occasional faults of a Government that lives in a spirit of charity than the consistent omissions of a Government frozen in the ice of its own indifference."--FDR
Joined: Sun Feb 18, 2007 6:14 pm Posts: 3213 Location: chicken shaped country in europe Gender: Male
stip wrote:
Mine wrote:
stip wrote:
iceagecoming wrote:
I've noticed a few but can't really think of any at the moment.
"Me you wouldn't recall"from Small Town always sounds...odd. But the delivery is amazing so it balances out =)
that one never bothered me. The line ike pointed to jumped out at me with WWS right away (still does). But McParadigm says that it is gramatically correct and who am I to argue?
Aren't small departures from correct grammar allowed in poems? Poets and lyricists use it to fit metrics.
well I'm not grading his grammar. I just don't care for how it sounds. It's awkward
I wasn't saying that. I know this variations are used for the reasons i mentioned before that's all.
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