broke out the old notebooks last night....foujd some old stuff i wrote...leave feedback if you wish. or hit your back button.

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everything’s great
when I’m not around
no one is late
now I feel the ground
they all hate
when I make a sound
but I can’t wait
to cut myself down

everything’s fine
when I am alone
all calm in my mind
writing in my room
I cross the line
when I come outside
the walls of my gloom

should have followed my gut
when I dug out this hole
I was looking for love
trust, all I found was myself
too willing to believe
such empty words
bury my thoughts
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just once more is all i ask
just do not let this cup pass
i'll drink it all and beg for more
i'll close my fists and prepare for war
give me your hand and give me your heart
give me your trust to not fall apart

and i'll give it to you
i can't promise anyhting

just once more is all i ask
just waste my one last chance
i'll sink again and wonder why
i'll think of you and hold you high
forget your name but remember your taste
remember your touch but forget your face

don't let it happen, just speak
and i'll give it to you
just ask and i'll be there

i'm wingless, so give me your hand.
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I write this down…to save myself
my ashes are my failing health
I say this felt…not too well
I’m bleeding out all my wealth

I speak these words…they’re not the first
I can’t convince me of my own worth
I’m worse for wear…my skin it tears
I see the red of freedom…and it repairs

what I have done
and said but once
its all undone so I can run

I think I let it go too far
I should have said it from the start
all I think and what I feel
let me know that it was real

I’m writing about what I don’t want to
just don’t let me stop you
go through with what you have to do
‘cause now I see right through you
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i'd hate to be alone
and youre the only one
i know i can make do
and stay too close to you

what the hell has grown?
i'm not even my own
what is this i feel?
what the hell is real?

you were by my side now i leave you
i leave you behind
you never looked back
i'll never look back


i must be getting old
my soul's been bought and sold
o close my eyes and pray
just for one more day

i fell for all your moves
i'm easily amused
you seem to kill my pain
i've found someone to blame

i'm at a crosroads
and you've been here before
I'm at a loss for words
i can't escape her lure
I can't feel a thing
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man...what a shitty time in my life....

thats great. i liked it very much.

good stuff, dan.