You have a phantom for a face
and all your dreams turn out the same
Phased by endless bright flashing lights
You wish for some control tonight

Now you're counting all of your scars
While watching falling stars
No wonder noone can know how it feels
No wonder noone can know how you feel__

Fantasy awaits you in sleep
What let's you down, won't in dreams
While letters pile at your feet,
and questions urgently repeat

You're counting all your scars
While watching fallen stars
No wonder noone can know who you are
No wonder noone can know who you are__



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I really like those two lines.

THANKS!

i like them alot too

very glad you appreciate them

Hey man, no problem. Thanks for sharing your work.

I also like how you can rhyme without seeming too rhyme-y. Many people fail at that.

I think your stuff is really cool. I always used to look for it on the old board, nice that you post here again these days!