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godeatgod
 Post subject: I poem I wrote
PostPosted: Thu Jan 06, 2005 7:44 am 
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It's called My Free Ipod

My free Ipod
I long for your touch
your soft silky hair
your silvery crutch

I want to wrap you
in bacon and
make love to your
megapixelhurtz
my sweet darling baby, oh yeah, oh yeah
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:cry:

that one really got to me geg. good work.
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i dont like my Ipod anymore :?

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Spike
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Kommienezuspadt wrote:
i dont like my Ipod anymore :?


can i have it/make love to it?
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ipods are soo 2004

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I like it, and even though it doesn't rhyme as well, I'd change the "crutch" to "crotch," just to sex it up a bit more. :wink:

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ElPhantasmo wrote:
I like it, and even though it doesn't rhyme as well, I'd change the "crutch" to "crotch," just to sex it up a bit more. :wink:

Hahahaah crotch
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MF
 Post subject: Re: I poem I wrote
PostPosted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 3:17 pm 
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godeatgod wrote:
It's called My Free Ipod

My free Ipod
I long for your touch
your soft silky hair
your silvery crutch

I want to wrap you
in bacon and
make love to your
megapixelhurtz
my sweet darling baby, oh yeah, oh yeah


:lol:
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