Lyrics to a song Called THE DEAD
By Kasey Lawson Inspired by Rival

See them walking
See them Talking
See them Smoking
WATCH THEM CHOKING
Lifeless people hear our screaming

WE are the dead that walk this earth we call our home
WE are the dead that sleep with fears we call our own

Hear them snoring
Hear them scoring
Hear them reading
WATCH THEM BREATHING
lifeless people hear our weeping

We are the dead that walk this earth we call our own
We are the dead that eat in houses we call our homes
The fears that eat the minds creates the drones

See Them Working
Hear Them Working
Feel Them Hurting
WATCH THEM WORKING
Lifeless people work, work, work

We are the dead that walk this earth thats not our own
We are the drones that work for those that own our homes
We are the dead that slave until we live again

I feel it too. Yep.

I'm one of those for now.

Nice work Kasey.
Thanks for sharing.

i loike it! F CONFORMITY, YEAH?

Hm. I can feel the flow of the piece, you can see that it was written to music.
There's a unity of contents and form. And the rhythm of speech has something to it. I think it's a grower, it's pretty good. Not like anything I would have written lately, but apparently that's no criteria for quality. Good job sir.

actually it wasnt writen to music but rather with a tone or rythem in mind

The lyrics flow well but I just cant get a feeel for what youre stressing without music. Thats the hard part of posting lyrics is that music makes up half of the meaning. I dont know im drunk forive me.