Siren's an obvious strong starter; I mentioned elsewhere I've a weakness for fuzzed/garage/stoner rock, the dynamics are great, especially how it lurches from fuzz to clean and back. The backing/harmony vocals are really effective as well. All in all, a good, well-written, well-executed song.

I'm not a big fan of the verses in Proof Of Concept, it picks up a good bit in the chorus and afterwards it rollicks along. Again the backing vocals make the track.

As soon as I heard the opening bars of Jack's Heart I knew i was listening to something cool - I love that riff. I think that the verse is a weak point though, your singer needs to work a bit on that (in my humble opinion) and I think that this could be what is holding you back.

Don't Watch The Sun is very good, very atmospheric and well paced again, I do think that it's missing something though.

All in all, you've got a solid band writing good music. I think working on the verses should be your priority. It's obvious to me that there are some very good songs ready to be written by your band, but you need to tease them out. Good stuff, hopefully it'll keep getting better.

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Sweet...thanks dude!