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PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 6:52 am 
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Just curious what you think of this. Im not sure how much I like it as a whole, but its probably the most honest thing Ive written. Be gentle...




I don’t want to wait for you to make
The same mistakes as the rest of them
I don’t want to wait
for you to come around
I want you now, more than ever

I’m sitting here alone, confined
Just waiting by the phone
For you to call, but you don’t
But I pray someday you will

But I know I’ll never know just what its like for you to call
I guess I’ll never know just what it’s like to hold your hand
On the shore, of our favorite beach as we walk along
The sun is setting down
And I pray to stay awake all night just staring in your eyes
I make you laugh, you call me back
And much to my surprise…

Its just a dream
It’s never real
But I try so hard for you
And I pray so hard for you to see me as

The one you picture in your head when you dream of your life’s dream
I know I’m not what you want, I’m just a friend you can forget
I try so hard, to become, Everything you want and more

But I’m not, it’s just a dream
Just an image in my head
It’ll never be, more than a dream
Just an image in my head
I’m just a dream

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Open and heartfelt lyrics. I'd love to hear the song.

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Raziel wrote:
Open and heartfelt lyrics. I'd love to hear the song.


ditto.

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beware...from "honest" to "emo" there is a very thin line...

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Human Bass wrote:
beware...for "honest" to "emo" there is a very thin line...

from "for" to "from" there is a very thin line as well :wink:

actually I was gonna post an Ali G quote here, but nah.

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Raziel wrote:
Human Bass wrote:
beware...for "honest" to "emo" there is a very thin line...

from "for" to "from" there is a very thin line as well :wink:

actually I was gonna post an Ali G quote here, but nah.


:P

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Human Bass wrote:
beware...from "honest" to "emo" there is a very thin line...


Thats kind of what I was worried about...

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