“invisibility is quite neat” (anti-suicide)

a rocking hammock that cradles his hopes
may go twisted
fragility consumes the agile thoughts
colliding night and day with no dawn or dusk
and the man is on his knees
smaller than small
lets his hair grow to hide the cuts on his eyes
dont sympathize
he wants your love but just reflects you away
a scratched cd that wont play
one late night he stairs through the gaps of his spider hair
and starts to wrap from the top
a saran wrap cocoon
blue fingers and a cool white moon
coffee table journal complete
signed "invisibility is quite neat"
impaired vision in the mirror is impalement by pole into your soul
and its a radio that swims in your tub
a knife that has its way with your flesh
and red shadows are black
with a trickling tickling noise of you when you were a young flashy gun
loved ones faded dry with the bird chirps at dawn
swim parallel to the beach in a riptide
cause second chances get cancelled with suicide

wow.

great imagery.

thanks, i wrote this last spring, contradictly this one stands out to me because it is unpersonal, everyone can understand it and the message is strong and clear.