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PostPosted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 5:39 am 
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My english teacher told us how poets like to write about death so he made my whole class write a poem on death...this is my first post @ Release so don't be too harsh please...here goes:


Death is but a Dream

I see in my mind
A resemblance of you
As I lie here alone
With nothing to do

I hear nothing
Except the voice in my head
My eyes are closed tightly
My body clutches the bed

I continue to think of you
The loss that I have
It hurts me so deep
I’m one you cannot save

I’ve given up on life
My breaths taken aside
It’s too hard to go on
But I cannot hide

I wake up from my dream
And I see you there lying
You’re right next to me
Off together, we’ll go dying

Can you find the PJ line in it too? :)

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Is it the 'voice inside my head' part from SOLAT?


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 8:18 pm 
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parchy wrote:
Is it the 'voice inside my head' part from SOLAT?


No...keep guessing

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"i'm the crescent, the sickle, so sharp the blade
i'm the flick of the shank that opened your veins
i'm the dusk, i'm the frightening calm
i'm a hole in the pipeline, i'm a road side bomb..."

:peace: Frank


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