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Photos two, six, and seven have potential to be good photographs.
What I like about photo two is the color and the tones in it. The composition's weak though. The sun probably should've been in that sweet spot 2/3rds of the way to the right.
The sky and the clouds make photo six. The ground is really nice as well. I wish that fence or whatever wasn't there. Also wish that the photo was bigger and that the ground didn't take up quite so much space at the bottom.
Photo seven is nice because those blurred lights sure are neat. I've got a couple of pictures like that. The heart's cute. I'd like to read or write a story based on this photo.
The rest are really just snapshots.
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thanks, jeff.
photo two was actually taken at night. i was just testing out the bulb setting and shutter release thing on my new camera. i'm kind of surprised that it came out as nicely as it did.
photo six was taken from a moving car somewhere in southern minnesota. i actually like the irrigation cart in the photo - it seems so decidedly midwestern to me. i do have the larger, raw version of the photo. i'll play around with some different crops.
i do sort of wonder about your definition of "snapshot," though. photos one, three, four, eight and nine were actually carefully composed. the others were quite literally shot from car windows while moving.
i do appreciate the critiques, though.
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