i am invicible, should
be suspended from clouds:
i've learned to
love my hair and
make it by thirty and
why america
hates
fat women and
how women
get
really rich and
i have seen THE COAT.

but, there is nothing here, and
these moments are born from
description
and pillows,
a glossy sheen,
postcards, lightbulbs,
libraries, papers,
and coffee.

Very, very good. The clipped style, short lines and use of enjambement are very effective in conveying the pace of modern life in a stream of conciousness style. I don't want to go further into it in case I misinterpret your work, but if I'm right, this is very, very good.