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PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 7:11 pm 
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need some povs other than my own....i like how the dark/unfocused works in these shots, but i'm not sure if i'm just being subjective because i took them...know it shouldn't matter, but some other thoughts would be great....

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I like the last two, I think you could probably tone them up a bit because they look a bit muddy. Lots of mood in these though, nice work.

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i love that last one. nice job, mister.


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The second two are good. I really like the last one, but I think it would have been a better shot without the blur.


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I really like the last one too, but did you have to lay on that dirty floor to take it?

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speed up the shutter speed to eliminate the blur, unless that's what you were going for.

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groovy...thanks....was feeling pretty "good" when all three were taken, so they were all in automatic mode....i agree with the vibe that the last two are better shots than the first...wasn't on the floor, but was petty damn close for the last one....

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I'll be honest. Not really my thing. The whole low light blurry thing that is.

The first one seems like it needed a longer exposure. That would have brought out your subject better.

The second two are good shots. They're interesting and composed well.
In fact, I really like the last one. However, I find the blurriness of both shots to be distracting. If focused, I feel you have some shots.

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groovy....thanks for all the input....how about these...

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the third picture in the first group is awesome

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Bacchanal wrote:
groovy....thanks for all the input....how about these...


are you going for the blur or not..?

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going for it....

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Bacchanal wrote:
going for it....


O_o -- i like the brown toned one, 'cuz it has great perspective. i just don't like how it's a bit blurry.

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