Okay, this is far away from being finished, there are some lines that definitely still need some work, but... some input would be sweet.

read it from the red of my lips
the blood on my fingertips
the smell of molecular friction

pass around the sweet silver spoon
throw yourself out at the moon
against barbed wired restriction

We’re gonna sip in the day
And spit out the night
And be the arc of the sky

Don’t forget the way we first met
Sweet pretty darling so red
Your mouth warped in defy

preach to me from under your bed
speak of strength and forget
that I’m your crutch and your hideout

stand in line for the first strike
into the city we hike
blindfolded wandering the grout

We’re gonna sip in the day
And bleed out the night
And be the arc of the sky

Don’t forget the way we first met
Sweet pretty darling so red
Your face a source of amazement