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PostPosted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 8:00 pm 
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Finalizing the list
Of where we're going
You can take me there
With nobody knowing

Come on over
to the other side
and in your heart
I will confide

Late Evenings and
Later Mornings
There's never much time
But, still, we're always soaring

High, High into the clouds
Waving at 'em in the windows
They can't see us
But God still knows

I knew this wouldn't last forever
Me and You, You and me
But after what we've done
I won't be with you for eternity

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i'm the flick of the shank that opened your veins
i'm the dusk, i'm the frightening calm
i'm a hole in the pipeline, i'm a road side bomb..."

:peace: Frank


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That was good but it was a little sad. :cry:
I think it would have gone better as

Finalizing the list
Of where we're going
You can take me there
With no one knowing

I just thought it flows better. But that was actually pretty good pete. :thumbsup:


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tryinmorning wrote:
That was good but it was a little sad. :cry:
I think it would have gone better as

Finalizing the list
Of where we're going
You can take me there
With no one knowing

I just thought it flows better. But that was actually pretty good pete. :thumbsup:


yeah...i thought about that change and I thought my way just sounded better to my ears...but thanks for the advice...either works, really

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"i'm the crescent, the sickle, so sharp the blade
i'm the flick of the shank that opened your veins
i'm the dusk, i'm the frightening calm
i'm a hole in the pipeline, i'm a road side bomb..."

:peace: Frank


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