anyways this is a song i wrote back at end of summer and got thinking about it today. recorded it lazily a few months ago with some guitars and keyboards. anyways its kinda long and probly wont be liked. I really like second half of it though, i'm a sucker for keyboards sometimes and i wanted to mess around with crappy drum sounds on the keyboard and some other guitar stuff for the end. sloppily done but theres some nice parts i think.



heartbroken for the heartless

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=D652F47D5C7A01A6

it's pretty good, just kind of disjointed. you gotta bring the vocals out more. hard to hear em. are you self-conscious of how your voice sounds? bring it up higher in the mix.

i think this is a really good composition
i enjoy the instruments alot
nice use of keyboard

the only real flaw, i think, is the vocals
they seem to be performed ok but
i don't know.. it doesn't mix with the song well
perhaps next time push em out more, make em louder

thanks for a couple reply
and yeah i'm somewhat self conscious about my vocals. after i record them i think they sound arlight, then i listen the next day and am not too happy

i have the same recurring problem

i feel more practice will find a solution

dude really cool.

wow....from 6:30 to 9:00 is some of the best original music i've heard in a long time