listen here http://www.myspace.com/jontreemusic

i've had it recorded for a while and some of you may have already heard it..
i'm on a quest for comments, now.. so please: any and all thoughts of the song, write here

its got a cool atmosphere, vocals definatly nee do be louder sop lyrics can be heard better, cause i couldnt ge tthem a whole lot.

not my style or anything but has some good potential there