EDIT: This sucked ass, and has since been modified into this: viewtopic.php?f=12&t=68058 -o)

"censoring the poetry of life, or maybe beauty's just lost its novelty?"

"And, though the posters are tearing, and the spray paint is melting,
There's still a little bit of light"

you craft some strong lines here. despite changing the outlook of the piece completely, i would cut the last line, or at least revise it. it is a bold shift in a different direction (one that i wasn't expecting), and in poetry that is a technique that can work well. in this context however, it seems a little forced. just my 2 cents.

Loved the pace.

"Those who know where they are going can be just as lost as me."