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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 1:10 pm 
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Yourself?
When? Why? How?

I had a dream last night

There was millions of dollars

and an old friend or 5

I got my hands on some

And a friend or 2 died

Maybe they were just aquaintances

If they were friends, I might have cried?


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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 7:17 pm 
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tree_ wrote:
Yourself?
When? Why? How?

I had a dream last night

There was millions of dollars

and an old friend or 5

I got my hands on some

And a friend or 2 died

Maybe they were just aquaintances

If they were friends, I might have cried?


This would be a great prequel to Soon Forget (at leat in the way i interpret it). good stuff Tree.


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Nice little ditty, like to see it be a bit longer; though I say that to almost any work (other than my own).heh.

What do you think about ending with a period as opposed to a question mark. I think it'd be more in line with the tone of the poem. Just a thought, definitely like to see it evolve a bit more. Nice job.

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all i can do is shake my head and look away


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there you are again, making me want to cry... for no particular reason...

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