Nice little ditty, like to see it be a bit longer; though I say that to almost any work (other than my own).heh.
What do you think about ending with a period as opposed to a question mark. I think it'd be more in line with the tone of the poem. Just a thought, definitely like to see it evolve a bit more. Nice job.
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