Joined: Wed Feb 22, 2006 1:37 am Posts: 2465 Location: A dark place
my stepmom died when I was 15
I never liked her
her death struck me as uninspired
much like the woman herself
my dad faked concern
as did i
when she died I envisioned strapping her to the top of my dad's delta 88 and throwing her into a ditch like our old Christmas trees
or maybe a junkie's funeral would be more fitting
a whore left in an alley wrapped in a dirty carpet
this is the part where I am supposed to say something life-affirming
I can not
sometimes people get cancer and die
and sometimes they deserve it
happy mother's day
i never liked you
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Joined: Thu Mar 29, 2007 4:36 am Posts: 6781 Location: Struggle Town
fuck this is harsh, I love it. You tone is so laid back almost disinterested which is perfect for your content. I find your imagery beautiful because it is so dirty and raw. Favourite lines:
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or maybe a junkie's funeral would be more fitting a whore left in an alley wrapped in a dirty carpet
Joined: Wed Feb 22, 2006 1:37 am Posts: 2465 Location: A dark place
iceagecoming wrote:
Fucking blunt - i love it. There's nothing spared here, it's direct and so hard hitting.
May I ask which writer's inspire you...or who your favourite reads are (poetry or prose)?
I have felt a connection to Emily Dickinson since I was young. She means a lot to me. A family member. That being said, I realize that I write nothing like her.
I know it sounds weird, but newspapers and the news in general also inspires me.
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