settle down
taste the waves
breathe the water
exhale all thought
inhale darkness
comfortable blindness
sweet water
sweet indifferent water

colour me foolish
naive in my wishes
label me diseased
in my desperate longing for peace

off of the edge
it's not that easy
so lovely anchors
dragging me upwards

awesome. i think this is your first piece of yours that kind of resembles the same style i tend to write in. i like it a lot.

edit: i didn't mean that as in, you've almost reached my level , it's just that i recognized the style is all...

the same feeling, like you're writing my feelings or feeling my writings...

*deep sigh*

Want to hear it.

Whoa man, NICE.
Yeah that's how good i am at reviewing songs.

thank you very much. I appreciate it a lot.

I like it for real too.

fear not, i will listen to this and review (probably a la bateman ) this either tonight or this weekend.

awesome. I'm really interested in what you people think you know. I'm a little anxious because of the vocals...

It sounds a little little off at times but i don't know if it's on purpose or not because i think it fits quite well with the song at those particular times and i don't think you should even try to correct it. It's pretty much fine for me as it is. I'd have made the bass sound a little different though.

well the voice is supposed to just sound unclean, don't know if I overdid that....
the bass different in which way?

Man my girlfriend is talking and talking and i'm a little high, i'm not even gonna try to explain, i'd most certainly fail right now.
I don't think you overdid it though.

alright. you're high from listening to your girlfriend talking?

Girlfriend ALWAYS comes here with ze pot.

that bass intro is awesome, I actually listened to this a few times trying to work out all the sounds you had going on cos the arrangement is really interesting (interesting in a good way, not interesting bizarre). Vocals were were good dude, really fitted with the cruisey mood. Actually I often struggle with marrying up what the guitars are doing and getting the right vocal tone to match but you have suceeded very well with this. I really liked it.

thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it. the different sounds... well what's interesting is that I usually tend to completely overload my songs with lots of lots of different sounds to create a really thick web of atmosphere... I tried a slightly different approach here, attending to make the few sounds I'm using as rich as possible... as I said, I'm glad you liked the arrangement, especially since I, after working on it for a while, just don't know what to think of it really I guess I should just not listen for a little... alright I wrote a lot more than I wanted to.

summary: thanks a lot.

Holy shit! That was nice. I agree with 1NS, the bass is killer. I also like the backing vocals. You have some serious talent sir. Take a bow.

wow thank you very much