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 Post subject: laugh @ my poem and I will kill you.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 12:06 am 
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No title. I wrote it in another place, and at another time.






Sleek coat of blackened hue,
Covered in froth from a midnight ride.
Nostrils flared and mane askew,
She gallops the shore at high tide.

Unbroken spirit inspires it.
Hooves pummel the sand.
No saddle, no reins, mouth without bit.
The salty breeze rides atop her full hand.

Heart pounding in her chest,
the beautiful beast races.
Swift along with fury's best,
A waxing moonlight chases.

Heavy breath, and seaspray yet
as waves crash at her thunderous feet.
Riding hard to end in rest wet,
No man her back shall meet.

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 Post subject: Re: laugh @ my poem and I will kill you.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 12:14 am 
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is this about your mom

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 Post subject: Re: laugh @ my poem and I will kill you.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 12:18 am 
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f*cking karma is a boomerang, isn't it?

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 Post subject: Re: laugh @ my poem and I will kill you.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 3:21 am 
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px wrote:
f*cking karma is a boomerang, isn't it?


I like how you bleeped the curse word. I like how you did that. Because surely adding the u would reeeeally fuck you over in the karma department.


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 Post subject: Re: laugh @ my poem and I will kill you.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 5:05 am 
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 Post subject: Re: laugh @ my poem and I will kill you.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 8:27 pm 
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parchy wrote:
px wrote:
f*cking karma is a boomerang, isn't it?


I like how you bleeped the curse word. I like how you did that. Because surely adding the u would reeeeally fuck you over in the karma department.




I appreciate your concern for my karmic existence, but might you have even an ounce of thought about the prose?

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 Post subject: Re: laugh @ my poem and I will kill you.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 9:12 pm 
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px wrote:
No title. I wrote it in another place, and at another time.






Sleek coat of blackened hue,
Covered in froth from a midnight ride.
Nostrils flared and mane askew,
She gallops the shore at high tide.

Unbroken spirit inspires it.
Hooves pummel the sand.
No saddle, no reins, mouth without bit.
The salty breeze rides atop her full hand.

Heart pounding in her chest,
the beautiful beast races.
Swift along with fury's best,
A waxing moonlight chases.

Heavy breath, and seaspray yet
as waves crash at her thunderous feet.
Riding hard to end in rest wet,
No man her back shall meet.



:) very cool! i like it!


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 Post subject: Re: laugh @ my poem and I will kill you.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 9:43 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: laugh @ my poem and I will kill you.
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 Post subject: Re: laugh @ my poem and I will kill you.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 9:00 pm 
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It's about YOUR mom. keep laughing, laughing boy! :twisted:

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 Post subject: Re: laugh @ my poem and I will kill you.
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It's about YOUR mom. keep laughing, laughing boy! :twisted:

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