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potatowave wrote:
So are you planning for your "shitty little song with no words" to ever have words or will it stay an instrumental?
Another board user who liked the song actually wrote some lyrics for it. However, I cant sing for shit...so it may just stay as is. I kind of like it with no words, but these lyrics are pretty good too.
Too fragile to speak So easy to let her down Maybe I'll walk away Let it work itself out somehow
Still, she looks to me for strength Ironic I've never been weaker Should it be this hard? Is this how it ends?
I gave you everything I was But you want more than I am This could have been beautiful If not for you
All I wanted was somebody to dance with To laugh with, to peer into But you compromised my simplicity Maybe you're right Maybe we're better off this way I don't know how it got away But its pointless to search for it now I'll miss you...parts of you anyway Think of me from time to time
Weight of the world comes crashing down Easy to crumble underneath Tide is rising, it's closing in I'm helpless as it's drowning me
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tryinmorning wrote:
poppin. what are you using? fl studio?
My pc laptop crashed a few weeks ago, so my buddy let me borrow one of his mac ibooks. He showed me how to use garage band and helped me record the song. I just played the guitar parts and approved the drum beat.
My pc is fixed now, but I fell in love with the mac for the week or so I had it. I'm definitely contemplating buying one for garage band alone.
Do you know of any recording programs for the pc? I used to have audacity, but I never fully figured it out.
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PJ10alive41 wrote:
potatowave wrote:
So are you planning for your "shitty little song with no words" to ever have words or will it stay an instrumental?
Another board user who liked the song actually wrote some lyrics for it. However, I cant sing for shit...so it may just stay as is. I kind of like it with no words, but these lyrics are pretty good too.
Too fragile to speak So easy to let her down Maybe I'll walk away Let it work itself out somehow
Still, she looks to me for strength Ironic I've never been weaker Should it be this hard? Is this how it ends?
I gave you everything I was But you want more than I am This could have been beautiful If not for you
All I wanted was somebody to dance with To laugh with, to peer into But you compromised my simplicity Maybe you're right Maybe we're better off this way I don't know how it got away But its pointless to search for it now I'll miss you...parts of you anyway Think of me from time to time
Weight of the world comes crashing down Easy to crumble underneath Tide is rising, it's closing in I'm helpless as it's drowning me
When you say can't sing, do you mean you really can't sing or you're just shy? Those are some interesting lyrics. If you do decide to put it all together, I'd like to hear it. Even if you don't, I'd be interested to hear how it develops.
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I'm not sure what types of programs there are but I've heard the name Garage Band thrown around before. Shit is probably mad expensive so just find some free not as good program or you know, the obvious.
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MikeyIsGod wrote:
you're aware metallica has a song called devil's dance right? it's pretty freakin cool. your song is good. i like the beat.
Actually, no. I'm not really that "into" Metallica and I'm not very familiar with their songs. In all honesty I just picked the name of the song before I posted it here....kind of goes along with the whole "shitty little song thing."
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it...but the beat is fake.
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Worked on this yesterday...still trying to work out the timing with the drums, but I'm getting there.
Even though I think you're a brat, I like your tune.
Tight work.
The drums and the bass are bit too overpowering in that recording. I love how the bass comes in though. And that's quite a guitar you're strumming. Best of luck!
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PJ10alive41 wrote:
MikeyIsGod wrote:
you're aware metallica has a song called devil's dance right? it's pretty freakin cool. your song is good. i like the beat.
Actually, no. I'm not really that "into" Metallica and I'm not very familiar with their songs. In all honesty I just picked the name of the song before I posted it here....kind of goes along with the whole "shitty little song thing."
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it...but the beat is fake.
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MikeyIsGod wrote:
PJ10alive41 wrote:
MikeyIsGod wrote:
you're aware metallica has a song called devil's dance right? it's pretty freakin cool. your song is good. i like the beat.
Actually, no. I'm not really that "into" Metallica and I'm not very familiar with their songs. In all honesty I just picked the name of the song before I posted it here....kind of goes along with the whole "shitty little song thing."
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it...but the beat is fake.
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When you say can't sing, do you mean you really can't sing or you're just shy? 
it's pretty freakin cool. your song is good. i like the beat.
