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 Post subject: just pretend
PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 7:41 am 
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sun comes up, and i wake to greet it
i walk about, im part of it
and it may have happened without me
but not in exactly this way

sun comes up, i shielded my eyes from it
i turn away, block the glare
and i wish it would ignore me
but thats not really its way

sun comes up, but this time i missed it
alone, though i try not to care
please.. no longer consider me
just pretend that im not there

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SmilinSkullRing
 Post subject: Re: just pretend
PostPosted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 4:56 am 
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I like the second verse. The "I wish it would ignore me" line is powerful, and I understand it quite well.

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demetrios
 Post subject: Re: just pretend
PostPosted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 1:46 am 
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SmilinSkullRing wrote:
I like the second verse. The "I wish it would ignore me" line is powerful, and I understand it quite well.


same here friend! :(
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 Post subject: Re: just pretend
PostPosted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 2:27 am 
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demetrios wrote:
SmilinSkullRing wrote:
I like the second verse. The "I wish it would ignore me" line is powerful, and I understand it quite well.


same here friend! :(

Aww.

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SmilinSkullRing
 Post subject: Re: just pretend
PostPosted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 11:25 pm 
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I still like that line. :nice:

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 Post subject: Re: just pretend
PostPosted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 5:24 am 
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SmilinSkullRing wrote:
I still like that line. :nice:

im glad you havent done a 180 and come to hate it :D

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Raziel
 Post subject: Re: just pretend
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 7:31 pm 
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yeah that 2nd verse is really good and the 3rd one ends in a way that seems very familiar... I think I can indentify with the mindframe that was written in and... well I just like it.

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