Something I just wrote. I might go back and add another verse. I don't know yet. Would appreciate any comments...good or bad.



I am jaded and a cynic
Yet I’m a hopeless romantic
Isn’t this ironic to you?
And if I can reconcile these differences
I’d appreciate a nudge
In the direction that’ll get me through

Because I’ve lived my whole life searching for love
But I’ll never admit that it’s true
If I did, what would you think?
Just how far would you run?
Knowing that I might be looking at you
But don’t you worry your little heart
I’m gonna end it before it starts
I’ve got all kinds of mistakes to make with you

I’m pure and clean
I’m dirty and mean
There is no Jesus I believe in to save me
So now what words do you have to say?
They say silence is golden but that’s not always true
Sometimes you’ve got to yell, “I love you. I need you.
I’m blue without you.”

I’ve lived my whole life searching for love
But I’ll never admit that it’s true
If I did, what would you think?
Just how far would you run?
Knowing that I might be looking at you
But don’t you worry your little heart
I’m gonna end it before it starts
I’ve got all kinds of mistakes to make with you

Yeah, don’t you worry your little heart
I’m gonna end it before it really starts
I’ve got all kinds...
All kinds of mistakes to make with you

I really like this a lot. Your chorus is my favorite part:

Awesome. Thanks.

Yeah this bit really stands out to me, it seems drowned in hopelessness, quite powerful

Thanks.

It's meant to sound that way of course. But also, a little defiant, like I don't care and that is what I want to do.