Just wrote this today. Critique away!


I’ve got a broken spirit and a loneliness to tame
Absolutely no way to transcend these blues
I’ve got the deepest sorrows and a mind full of blame
Holding a deep down truth I can’t send to you

Hold my tongue, suppress my views
But I can’t stop telling you I want you
Worst of all is this need
The most I’ve ever seen a heart bleed
To witness it is bad enough
To be the victim is most fucked up

Strong and brave
Be strong and brave
The weight of another drags me to my grave
I wish I believed that
I really do
Would be easier to get over you
I've tried these lies to deceive myself
But I'm still searchin' for a whole lotta help

I’ve got a broken spirit and a loneliness to tame
Absolutely no way to transcend these blues
I’ve got the deepest sorrows and a mind full of blame
Holding a deep down truth I can’t send to you

Hold my tongue, suppress my views
But I can’t stop telling you I want you
Worst of all is this need
The most I’ve ever seen a heart bleed
To witness it is bad enough
To be the victim is most fucked up

Worst of all is how this heart bleeds
I’m no witness, that’s bad enough
I’m the pathetic victim, I’m fucked up
Yeah, worst of all is how this heart bleeds
Worst of all is that this heart bleeds