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 Post subject: Re: Writing in general
PostPosted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 4:44 am 
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These are great, Mickey.

These lines really resonate with me for some reason:

I dreamed I told you all the girls I slept with
while you were away.

I dreamed I found the book
I told you I couldn’t find.


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 Post subject: Re: Writing in general
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Thanks Reid, that means a lot. I wrote these a while back so I'm not as hot on them as I used to be, but I am still proud of those lines.

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 Post subject: Re: Writing in general
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Also, the imagery you used to describe the clouds. Is that your voice reading these? It helps so much.

I'm about to log off, but I'll talk more later.


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 Post subject: Re: Writing in general
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That is me. I was a little 0___o about reading my own work, but in the end decided to do it.

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I think I'd feel the same way. Then again, I'd be reading something like this outloud so can you blame me?

zoo eyes
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 Post subject: Re: Writing in general
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Mickey wrote:
That is me. I was a little 0___o about reading my own work, but in the end decided to do it.


Ugh, I sound fucking terrible reading my stuff. I need to improve. Fast. Nothing is more horrifying than listening back to yourself on webcam.


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 Post subject: Re: Writing in general
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If anyone is in New Orleans or would like to be in New Orleans on the 17th of this month, I'll be reading my shitty poetry at a bar with some other people who are more talented than I am.

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If you tell me what time you read, I'll make sure to look five hours eastward on the 17th.


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Mickey wrote:
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That's awesome. Somebody will be recording & uploading your recital, yes?

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knee tunes wrote:
Mickey wrote:
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That's awesome. Somebody will be recording & uploading your recital, yes?

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lol @ recital

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cutuphalfdead wrote:
lol @ recital


I didn't want to put it as he did and say,

"Will anybody be recording you reading your shitty poetry?....."

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 Post subject: Re: Writing in general
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It is shitty. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. But I have no idea. Perhaps.

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Mickey wrote:
It is shitty. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. But I have no idea. Perhaps.


just take a digital recorder and then sound cloud it or something, yes?

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I will certainly be drunk. You're asking a lot from me.

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Mickey wrote:
I will certainly be drunk. You're asking a lot from me.


I don't recommend reading drunk. Yeah. It'll bite you on the ass.


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Based on my prior reading experience, a little drunk will go a long way.

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We all have our own path, friend.


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Feel the path of everyday
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