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I couldn't figure out with this streaming thought of mine
So I decided to make a thread officially for poetry and rhyme.
It might have been because I have too much play time
Or that I'm trying to practice poetry on a dime.
Whatever the reason that may actually be
Post whatever word-play that you want to see.
Because whatever you post might actually help me
Or just allow you to kill what little time you have free.
So bust a rhyme that you feel to speak
Theres nothing you can say thats too weak
Whether it flows instantly or takes a week
Post a brain-teaser that'll make our minds freak.
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you forgot one thing, deanna......
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stip wrote:
In five years, when you get laid and grow up, you should go back and read some of these posts and if you've turned into a decent person you'll realize how much of an asshole you sound like right now
Joined: Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:15 am Posts: 39 Location: Morganton, North Carolina
Hmm, didn't think random thoughts could be considered art
I envisioned stringing together just pieces and parts
I couldn't be more so let down than now
I guess I should leave honorably and take a bow
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Crazy Horse wrote:
Hmm, didn't think random thoughts could be considered art I envisioned stringing together just pieces and parts I couldn't be more so let down than now I guess I should leave honorably and take a bow
Perhaps you should.
Good good.
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Joined: Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:15 am Posts: 39 Location: Morganton, North Carolina
lefty wrote:
Wasn't rhyming banned around here? I remember there was a backlash to the freestyling going on between the Bloods and Crips.
Bloods and Crips in a Pearl Jam thread?
The juxtaposition makes a painful throb in my head
I haven't been around here since Kerry lost in November 2004
As you can probably tell, my life is too much of a bore
And to think there are Bloods and Crips lurking around in here
We have them around here, but we all just call them "queer"
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Man, I hate to say it but all that shit sucks
I just checked it out and nearly puked out my guts
And people wonder why Rap today is just poorly constructed incoherant crap.
Man, nobody even came close to creating genuine rap...
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Joined: Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:15 am Posts: 39 Location: Morganton, North Carolina
washmykev wrote:
So basically what you're saying is you wanna battle rap?
Hmm, I don't know if I'll be up for it right now
Tomorrow afternoon maybe when time when allow
I cannot think of a good come back line here in this mood
So I guess I'll wait for your next post, dude
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Crazy Horse wrote:
washmykev wrote:
So basically what you're saying is you wanna battle rap?
Hmm, I don't know if I'll be up for it right now Tomorrow afternoon maybe when time when allow I cannot think of a good come back line here in this mood So I guess I'll wait for your next post, dude
Joined: Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:15 am Posts: 39 Location: Morganton, North Carolina
Damn I'm really losing it from wear and fatigue
I put "when" instead of "will", what is wrong with me?
I'm posting mistakes now that I don't see
I'm getting pissed for no reason, this can't be.
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Crazy Horse wrote:
washmykev wrote:
So basically what you're saying is you wanna battle rap?
Hmm, I don't know if I'll be up for it right now Tomorrow afternoon maybe when time when allow I cannot think of a good come back line here in this mood So I guess I'll wait for your next post, dude
I don't know if you've noticed
But your rhymes are as standard as mine
Except where I go A-B-A-B
You stick with the A-A-B-B lines
Don't worry, this doesn't make you less of a man
Oh wait...wait. Yes it does.
Ooops, was that a personal attack?
Good thing BP's in the other thread calling the fuzz.
Joined: Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:15 am Posts: 39 Location: Morganton, North Carolina
washmykev wrote:
I don't know if you've noticed But your rhymes are as standard as mine Except where I go A-B-A-B You stick with the A-A-B-B lines
Don't worry, this doesn't make you less of a man Oh wait...wait. Yes it does. Ooops, was that a personal attack? Good thing BP's in the other thread calling the fuzz.
I guess you want me to take it personally, or so it may seem
I pitty the fool who belittles others to make him feel better than crap
But I'm not going to stand here and let your ego gleem
Like all those honkies on T.V., I'll show you I can rap.
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