misplaced.

even when pj's lyrics didnt fit my 'situation' but the music did i tried to come up with my own. the closer i matched my words to his, the more personal i could make the song. i cant sing with ed's intensity but i'd sing my version over his and it helped me get stuff out. i was just a kid at the mercy of who i was supposed to trust and obey. thanks ev

___not for you____
all that hatred
comes from youth
predications not even true
with no power
what can i do?????????????????
i will remember
why wont you, WONT YOU

this is all from YOU
this is all from YOU
this is all from YOU

i never once fought you
FUCK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

_____comatose______
obliterate an object
put me in a back room
freak of all conditions
freak of air and friction
yeah i'll be hanging upside down and there i will wait
for what he did to meeeeeeee

feel his right hand
yeah thats my father
feel his right hand
caught some blows and no tears are falling

consider me a bastard
leave me in my back room
blood on all the pictures
why am i dads mission???????????

feel his right hand
yeah lets not fault him
feel his right hand
caught some blows and no tears are falling
feel his right hand
yeah lets not fault him
feel it rising


what have i done??????????
i'll break no more
IS IT ALL EGO
TREATING LOVE LIKE A HATRED
AT MY COST???????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yeah i'll be hanging upside down and there i will wait
for all he took from me
feel it rising
yeah next i fought him
feel my right hand
caught my blows and no tears are falling
feel alright dad
yeah next i fought him
feel alright now
some things never got to be part of

you can use the release forum for this kind of thing. it works in gd too, i guess

your poems suck