I wrote and recorded a new song a lil bit ago. Just uploaded it last night. I like it, I hope you do too.

It's called "Ditto Ditto".

http://www.bandspace.com/theuncredibles
http://www.myspace.com/theuncredibles

Open the window
And see the light until it's gone
Tomorrow is a big day
Already signed my name to the grave
They never told me it would be like this
They always told me it wouldn't be like this

I knew it couldn't be real
The man didn't seem like he could feel
Tell me what I want to hear
Was tattooed on my forehead
Had I known
I wouldn't be here on my own
Had I known
I Promise
Had I known
I wouldn't be scared of not going home
Had I known
I promise

Ditto Ditto
You'll never be a widow
Noone ever gets hurt I promise
We'll get him a nice place
Cushy pillows and all
It'll be great
And you'll have money to spend for food

I knew it couldn't be real
The man didn't seem like he could feel
Tell me what I want to hear
Was tattoed on my forehead
Had I known
I wouldn't be here on my own
Had I known
I Promise
Had I known
I wouldn't be scared of dieing alone
Had I known
I promise

Why'd they tell me I would be safe?
They told me I'd never get sent to this place
If they said so I wouldn't be here
I'd never have to live in fear
They lied straight to my face
They forgot to mention they were getting paid
I'm so scared
And I don't want to be here anymore

Any opinions, feedback, etc. would be extremely appreciated.

its better than security on the rocks

Not sure if that's a compliment or not .. but thnx

i liked it....a little sloppy, and i think the drumming could use some work

but i did like the melody...maybe you should turn the vocals up a little too

good job though

Thanx for the compliment...Glad you liked it. It is a bit sloppy, it's a demo though. I'm not shooting for complete and absolute perfection. I don't think I'm patient enough for it anyayways.

As for the drumming.. well, it's a drum machine, and me being impatient I find it very tedious and boring to make drum tracks for my songs. Truly a labor of love.