(verse 1)
picked a beautiful mornin
to say hello without a smile

looking down as you're walkin
think it'll change in a while

(chorus 1)
you know how it's important
to live life happily

you do what bosses tell ya
and always dream you'll be
free

(verse 2)
what little sleep you live on
for all these dreams you can't let go

and everything that you need now
your mr. sandman only knows

(chorus 2)
don't say it's not important
to live life and be free

you do just what they tell ya
all you want is to be
happy
..and free

It works reall nicely with the music

and the way it's sung...

Hopefully I can get it recorded sometime soon

what little sleep you live on
for all these dreams you can't let go


Really speaks to me. Nice work man, can't wait to hear the finished product.

I just recorded it (after about 30 takes I finally got it right)

It's up on myspace

http://www.myspace.com/jontreemusic

Tell me what you think

I love it! The guitar works well, and I like the vocals, it's probably your nicest vocal melody so far. The way you sing freeeeeeeeeeeeee really does it for me.

thankkkkks

meh, good effort i guess but its pretty boring and has no feeling

though i agree with others that what little sleep and dreams line is a good one.

Thanks for the honest comment.

I understand it's not for everyone.