http://www.myspace.com/jontreemusic

Any thoughts very welcomed and appreciated, as usual

Verse 1

I drove down to Arco
I think I needed a change
Good place to change
a new chance for change

A pessimist dreaming
with many things I had to save
I couldn't say
I couldn't save

Chorus 1

She used to know me
Before it ended in the note
In the note

I ran out of money
Before it ended in the note
In the note

oh oh oh

Verse 2

It was there I met her
The new beginning, my new way
My brand new day
Sun-Shining way

Together we'd make it
In our perfect,loving way
With things to save
Thanks to change

Chorus 2

But we'd never make it
Before it ended in the note
In the note

Afraid to emit it
Before it ended in the note
In the note

oh oh oh

this is my favorite so far... no criticisms really, really liked the chorus

Afraid to emit it
Before it ended in the note
In the note

love it.

thanks guys

hey, tree, another bittersweet beauty. tks, man. i wish i could listen to the music, but my computer is blocked (i'm at work).