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Sheesh! Definitely one of the best things i've read round here for a while (and that's a biig compliment considering the quality of work on this board).
Joined: Tue May 30, 2006 2:48 pm Posts: 3115 Location: Edinburgh/Lincoln, UK
jcurley wrote:
iceagecoming wrote:
Sheesh! Definitely one of the best things i've read round here for a while (and that's a biig compliment considering the quality of work on this board).
Very good work...post more
thanks, i tried not to assign or give away any type of gender to the narrator. i think that thing is a year old, and i was up all night working on a paper and ended up revising this instead. great forum, and any constructive criticism is welcomed.
I noticed the lack of gender - it was a wise decision, I think it's just a specific as it needs to be, yet also as loose as it needs to be. Structurally, the piece reads and flows really well - perfectly matching the notions of dance and movement (which further adds to the irony of the piece i guess..?)
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