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 Post subject: So when I look at the sun and smile...
PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 4:00 am 
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So when I look at the sun and smile
it leaves me
the feeling
and when I close my eyes it hurts

all along the speeding highways
shone down with all its tar sweltering beauty
it leaves me
this feeling
and when I run away it still hurts

into the night and under the moon
masked in dimness illuminating
it leaves me
those feelings
and I sleep...

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 Post subject: Re: So when I look at the sun and smile...
PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 6:56 pm 
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Really liked it man, and the visuals were great.

I loved these lines in particular:

'shone down with all its tar sweltering beauty'

and

'masked in dimness illuminating'


Good stuff :thumbsup:


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 Post subject: Re: So when I look at the sun and smile...
PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 10:30 pm 
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thanks

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