I redid it since last time you might have heard it
tell me what you think or I'll be upset and I will do something rash

even if you have something negative to say

it's a download... until at http://www.myspace.com/jontreemusic

http://download.yousendit.com/FCC1DC3321273BCF

I really like the melody, though I admit it sounds like I've heard it before. The strum works well for this song...as does your voice and even the recording. This is the kind of song where, if I heard you singing it at an open mic night, I'd get excited and wonder if you had anything recorded to pick up.

that's cool. thanks man.