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I wish · **Posted:** Sun Dec 30, 2007 5:19 am

Like the dying fire
The stillness of you fades
As the sparks of dusk commiserate
The passing of another day.

conoalias · **Joined:** Fri Sep 02, 2005 5:20 am **Posts:** 31173

I wish wrote:

Like the dying fire
The stillness of you fades
As the sparks of dusk commiserate
The passing of another day.

for such a short piece, it's pretty intense. i can definitely identify with the sentiment expressed. strong.

corduroy_blazer · **Posted:** Wed Jan 02, 2008 9:00 pm

i like that.

I wish · **Posted:** Thu Jan 03, 2008 11:59 am

Thanks guys, I appreciate the kind words.

Refrain