I was going to post this here, but I only posted it at my blog instead.

Here's the post from there.

A few minutes to write this. I don't think it's special or anything, but I feel the need to post it.


Serious as a heart attack
Clichéd and over the edge
Try to be cool revealed as a hack
Rhyme this line and left to dread

Nothing more to write
Empty brain syndrome
A drink to clear it up
Lazy eyelids instead of epiphany
Left to myself and I don’t feel free

My two arms and the best hug
Lonely morning awake at 4 a.m.
Boozed and drugged and nothing to give
Procrastinating even not to live

A drink to clear it up
A drink to clear it up
A love to pick me up
Don’t leave me to me
It will never get done
End of the world
I'll still refuse to move

kelly, i love this. it feels like something i'd write (i hope this comes off as a compliment). i especially love the last seven lines.

im glad you posted this

Thanks. And yeah, that does come off as a compliment. I'm glad you like it!

Niiiice - it just got better and better with every line. i thought from the first 'drink to clear it up' it was really strong.

You write good .

A drink to clear it up
A drink to clear it up
A love to pick me up
Don’t leave me to me
It will never get done
End of the world
I'll still refuse to move


to quote social d... this is the 'story of my life'

iceagecoming, thanks for the compliment.

And Social D, are awesome, Ryu.

i think i understand this one...this hits close to home

Thanks for the comment.

this is nice

Hey, thanks. I was just thinking the last verse sounds a little Ryan Adams-ish though not as good.

pfft, this blows ryan adams outta the water.

i mean, i havent heard any ryan adams recently. guess im missing out. but for now, i like this way more.

in fact, i even wrote that last verse down in my book that i write stuff down in.

Wow.

Thanks for the comment regarding Adams too.