Joined: Mon Oct 18, 2004 2:29 pm Posts: 6984 Location: if anyone wants me, i'll be in my room Gender: Male
No New Shoe Blues
careful! i plead too late, though freely, i'd bleed too late now. the suture kit's too late no future, its my fate sure, it rhymes, but that doesnt make it pretty..
the only reason im not dead right now is because if you step in it you'll ruin your shoes and i dont want that.
nobody's buying new shoes 'cause i was irresponsible, incomprehensible, or just plain not sensible.
ruined carpet, red tracks and undeserved guilt attacks. my selfish desire retracts. ............................ im glad we had this talk.
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Last edited by Play C3 on Thu Dec 04, 2008 7:29 pm, edited 4 times in total.
the only reason im not dead right now is because if you step in it you'll ruin your shoes and i dont want that
This hit me like a brick to the head. I love how powerful these lines are, and how bluntly and directly they're delivered. I love the cynicism and the way it makes me wince. Good job.
Joined: Tue Oct 19, 2004 5:24 am Posts: 37009 Location: In Missouri, they would (will) not let me be Gender: Female
skunkthecat wrote:
Play C3 wrote:
the only reason im not dead right now is because if you step in it you'll ruin your shoes and i dont want that
This hit me like a brick to the head. I love how powerful these lines are, and how bluntly and directly they're delivered. I love the cynicism and the way it makes me wince. Good job.
I have to agree. Those lines are powerful.
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