I wrote this shortly after 9/11 and just found it recently. I would like some feedback (from those who haven't seen it already.)

Americhaos
What’s with this world we’re living in?
It’s not the way I thought it would be.
One new challenge after another,
Challenging my sanity.

Chorus:
Our world gets desperate more and more.
And we don’t know what we’re searching for.
Our world gets weirder every day.
And we don’t know what we can do or say.

If someone had told me then
All the things that I know now,
I would’ve found a way to save us all.
I would’ve found a way somehow. (Chorus)

We’re losing all control
Over the things that we love so.
Our hopes are getting dim.
Our future’s looking grim. (Solo) (Chorus)

Americhaos, Americhaos,
God, lay your prayers on thee. (Solo)

i was reminded of bad religion several times throughout this one.

my thoughts exactly