Wrote this in the last 30 minutes. I'm sure it needs adjustment, but I wanted to post it now for any feedback whatsoever.


I have nothing anymore
I won’t chase it anyway
I’ll let it all find me
Is this why I’m lonely?

I had it once but I let it go
I tried to be warm but I left it cold
I’m a little too blinded to see
Is this why I’m lonely?

I say I know what I want
But I really, I really don’t
Every time the going gets good
I tend to find a retreat
Is this why I’m lonely?

I’ve found the sun
And I’ve found the moon
I’ve found your love
I’ve found some truth
But out of it all
Seems to grow a lie
And I need you to help me
Find my mind

So call my name
Bring a smile to my face
Let me see those dark eyes
May they keep me in line
I’m not so sure I want to stay
Lonely all the time

But you aren't lonely, you have friends all across the world.




I like this poem it's great, it just flows nicely.

Thanks Rick. I know I got friends like you.

And glad you like it. I appreciate the feedback.

Looks like you kept my title, missy.

*pays stipend*

Yeah, it was a good idea you had. yaya

hey kelly! i havent seen you about lately.... then again, i only check in every few days so i may just be missing you. that being said, i dont know how i missed this one. i really like it.

Hey Ryu! I'm back in my hometown for most of the summer with only internet here and there, so that is probably why. I'm glad you like it. How are you?