We had the best time at your party. The wife and I thank you very much.

unbelievable, man. this piece flows really well.. some of the phrases roll right off the tongue (well i read it in my head, but you know what i mean).

these lines are my favorite:

I miss fall before it arrives.
I mythologize women before we have met.
I cut out some Truth from church newsletters
quoting scripture with ease and confidence.

Yeah, i think this is the best piece i've seen by you...it's so beat, i love it.

My favourite part:

There is only you and wind
blowing nostalgia right through the god damn
window when it was too frigid to leave bed to begin with

Be sure to throw something in the writer's prompt.

We had the best time at your party. The wife and I thank you very much.