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cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: do do cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: sittin in the chatroom cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: just me and rick cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: exercising cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: my internet schtick cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: all by my lonesome cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: til the utahrd got here cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: nmow it's a party cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: lets crack those beers
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Joined: Mon Oct 18, 2004 2:29 pm Posts: 6984 Location: if anyone wants me, i'll be in my room Gender: Male
wow, i can really feel what it was like in that chatroom. this is a hard thing to convey in a poetic sense, but you really nailed it.
my favorite passage is:
Quote:
cutuphalfdead:cutuphalfdead: sittin in the chatroom cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: just me and rick cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: exercising cutuphalfdead: do do, do do cutuphalfdead: my internet schtick
it related how you feel not only about your posting (exercising) but how when rick is around, you never feel alone. thats something (at least this is my belief) that anyone can relate to.
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