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oneproudmonkey
 Post subject: Dear John
PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 7:52 am 
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Hi guys,

love to get some thoughts on this. A riff I've had for a long time and recently tried to record. The recording is OK but I have no idea where to go next, i originally had in mind something along the rise against line [but i don't have a voice anywhere near as good as Tim McGrath] but...

Anyway, here's a sample, basically just the three riffs played one after the other, let me know what you think :)

http://www.box.net/shared/ie55vv80nr

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SmilinSkullRing
 Post subject: Re: Dear John
PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 6:08 am 
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I like it myself.

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oneproudmonkey
 Post subject: Re: Dear John
PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:35 pm 
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Thanks :)

I'm just really wondering where i should go with the melody... angry/staccato or harmonies a la bad religion...

I'm working on lyrics at the moment so maybe that'll help...

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SmilinSkullRing
 Post subject: Re: Dear John
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Lyrics will help I'm sure. Good luck. :thumbsup:

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