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Scouts, we found you Picked you up out of the desert And you told us the trials of starvation Told us how you wanted to die We listened
Temperatures change Back and forth Then come full circle A year later we sit face to face In a damp dark room Won’t paint the walls Can’t sell the house
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Scouts, we found you Picked you up out of the desert And you told us the trials of starvation Told us how you wanted to die We listened
Temperatures change Back and forth Then come full circle A year later we sit face to face In a damp dark room Won’t paint the walls Can’t sell the house
You still want to die I wonder why you can’t
i like this ending, it is blunt like a though and kinda gives the impression that you don't want to pry. i just like the way it ends here but which ever ending you choose it is a great piece
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