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 Post subject: Maturity
PostPosted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 9:32 am 
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You’ve triumphed
And maturity has come to you all
Your days of shoplifting are long gone and
There’s a child on the way

I don’t mean to put this in the wrong light but
Raise the crystal wine glass up
Until it illuminates the entire ballroom
The glare of the chandelier shines right through

Your tired, I was tired, Hunter was tired
Persevere most of us must climb this spiral staircase
Until adolescence hits us a second time
And the chandelier comes crashing down

Who could have seen this coming
Who could have prepared us
When we had all the tools we needed all along
Who could have forced my hand
To do such terrible things
When I held love directly in my palm


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 Post subject: Re: Maturity
PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:26 pm 
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nice work on this dev. i especially like the last three lines

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 Post subject: Re: Maturity
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thanks bro i kinda really wanted someone to recognize this one.

I pretty much like it all but the Hunter line, which even has incorrect grammer. And I have mixed feelings about the last stanza, it feels cliche of me to end it like that.
But yer I was pretty proud of this one.


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