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 Post subject: Aloof 2 - (a short poem inspired by a military way of life)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:52 pm 
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I wish to be anonymous here
to be a cause of least reactions

If I quiet my thoughts,
lessen fears
might I disassociate
from every peer?

Should I find discipline in
that which matters most,
could I escape the fateful meeting of
these lemmings' final joke?

I'll be no casualty
nor be their warrior

Never anything so dry
as a dish on their table
as painful,
discouraging, or ugly
as what's inside their mirror


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 Post subject: Re: Aloof 2 - (a short poem inspired by a military way of life)
PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 2:55 pm 
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quickly wanted to mention that i enjoyed that last stanza. i'm in an airport in London and comp. access is limited. anyway, nice work.

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