Post subject: SOTM #143: Distance of her life decided in the womb...
Posted: Tue May 19, 2009 5:02 pm
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Just A Girl
Thieves in the window Trouble down the hall The resin white ceiling Blood, drippings, flows… Out on the front line Preachers sweep the earth Out on their backsides With nothing in common with the problem
She’s just a girl Just, just a girl Just one time around She had little chance to make good Distance of her life decided in the womb
Burning fires Feel the red, true belief This maid in progress Betraying your mothers need for shelter
Just a girl Just, just a girl Just one time around She had little chance to make good Dreams still now she’s young But it can be taken away Just one time around Can be taken away We all make mistakes
Hush now baby Don’t you cry You’re my little alibi Oh please I need some sleep And I’ll be taking you with me…
Just a girl… Just a kid…
The Ten sessions were arguably the most fertile Pearl Jam ever had, producing a ton of b-sides that have made it into the community. Some, like State of Love and Trust, Breath, Wash, Footsteps, Yellow Ledbetter, and Alone, band classics. Others, like Brother and Hold On, come across as generic and forgettable, with grunge 101 riffs and tossed off lyrics. They’re fun every now and then, but they’re mostly just going to appeal to a completist (although Brother became a hit for some reason). I’d put just a girl in the later category.
The music is pretty forgettable (although it is played with heart), and is standard mid tempo Pearl Jam—tense, slowly delivered verses, expansive chorus, outro solo, and a foreboding bridge (although it doesn’t do any of these things particularly well). The vocal melody is nothing to write home about, although Eddie delivers it with passion. The one thing that really separates Just a Girl from the rest of the pack is the lyrics and subject matter, which are pretty solid for a song the band tossed off and never really came back to. It seems to be a song about abortion, told not from the perspective of the girl giving the abortion, but the way that people (religious figures, activists, etc) miss the fact that it is first and foremost and intensely personal, profound, life changing, scary decision that someone has to make at an extremely fragile moment. They are dehumanized precisely at the time they most need others to recognize their own humanity. That regardless of everything else playing out at this moment, at the center of the struggle is just a girl—nothing more than that and because of that, so much more.
The bridge is intriguing—it’s clearly directed towards the unborn child, and her claim that she’ll be following the child gives the song a great deal more weight—rather than her being in a hospital it puts me in mind of a back alley clinic—a girl who, unable to turn anyplace safe for help, is forced to go someplace underground or illegal, where her procedure is botched and her life is now in danger (blood, dripping, flows…). If that’s the case I would have liked to see them follow this up, or develop it further. It’s ambiguous, which can be powerful (see Jeremy) but it feels more underdeveloped than deliberate. In the end this is a 2 star song for me, but unlike Brother or Hold On, could have been much more.
For those of you who have managed to get a copy of the Lost Dogs demo disc there is a different mix on there. Musically I think it’s a bit superior (has some more funk to the guitar and a little more urgency overall), although Eddie’s performance may be better on the Ten Re-release.
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Post subject: Re: SOTM #143: Distance of her life decided in the womb...
Posted: Tue May 19, 2009 8:16 pm
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Distance of her life decided in the womb...
i heard this song for the first time probably 15, 16 years ago? i never realized these were the lyrics. i used like it alot more, but ill agree its better than brother.
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Post subject: Re: SOTM #143: Distance of her life decided in the womb...
Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 6:46 pm
Johnny Guitar
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warehouse wrote:
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Distance of her life decided in the womb...
i heard this song for the first time probably 15, 16 years ago? i never realized these were the lyrics.
Unless "womb" ends with an "s", that lyric isn't right. The unofficial lyric sites say "reverse" - it sounds a little more to me like "words" or "worst".
Post subject: Re: SOTM #143: Distance of her life decided in the womb...
Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 11:57 pm
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UglyRedHonda wrote:
warehouse wrote:
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Distance of her life decided in the womb...
i heard this song for the first time probably 15, 16 years ago? i never realized these were the lyrics.
Unless "womb" ends with an "s", that lyric isn't right. The unofficial lyric sites say "reverse" - it sounds a little more to me like "words" or "worst".
I wouldn't trust unoffical lyric sites (not that mine are offical). And womb makes sense with the song, but I'll listen again
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Post subject: Re: SOTM #143: Distance of her life decided in the womb...
Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 4:30 am
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the problem I see with a phonetic translation is that
A--Eddie is notorious for mumbling
B--some of those lyrics either don't make sense
Feel red to beliefs Dismay in progress
or, with the rose lyric, are a bit crass for him. At least that's how I hear it. What do others think?
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Post subject: Re: SOTM #143: Distance of her life decided in the womb...
Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 5:30 am
Johnny Guitar
Joined: Sun Nov 21, 2004 10:45 pm Posts: 108
I just listened to the Off Ramp performance for comparison, and I'm more convinced that the lyric in the subject of this thread is: "Distance of her life / Decided in the words". There's definitely an "s" in that last word, and the Off Ramp performance sounds a lot like "the words".
And that's what's tricky about figuring out the lyrics - there are certain hard sounds that rule out certain words. "Flows" fits in the fourth line, but whatever word is there ends in "ts". (Maybe "floats"?)
From the Off Ramp performance: the "feel red, true beliefs" line sounds like "feel ready to release". (Interesting switch to "invading" from "betraying".)
The hardest part about interpreting it is that the key words aren't firm. It could go in a couple of directions depending on what those words actually are. Minus some of the more abortion-suggestive words, and it sounds more like a "Why Go" / "Leash" kind of song that Ed wrote repeatedly in those days.
But, oddly, there must be actual lyrics of some form. The Off Ramp performance is almost identical to the studio version - it's not one of Ed's "off the top of the head" takes.
Sorry if I'm going on and on with this - for me, lyric transcription turns into a puzzle that's hard to put down.
Post subject: Re: SOTM #143: Distance of her life decided in the womb...
Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 9:54 am
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I just realized I used to think 'woods'. It made the image even stronger, for me.
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Post subject: Re: SOTM #143: Distance of her life decided in the womb...
Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 1:11 pm
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UglyRedHonda wrote:
I just listened to the [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GiVljel5zSM] The hardest part about interpreting it is that the key words aren't firm. It could go in a couple of directions depending on what those words actually are. Minus some of the more abortion-suggestive words, and it sounds more like a "Why Go" / "Leash" kind of song that Ed wrote repeatedly in those days.
I agree with this. More of the same, only warmed over and distinctly inferior.
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