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 Post subject: My feeble attempts at lyric writing
PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 6:41 am 
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Ok here goes...the music is still getting worked on too, but I don't much fashion myself a lyric writer (and even less a singer). That said, I'll submit my tenative lyrics here and if they suck, feel free to tell me so.

Your hair hides your face
Nature over nurture
A breakable habit

Flickers in the sky
Moving millions of years away
It seemed fleeting
But it stayed in your eyes forever
Racing the setting sun
A long walk down a short road
A deep breath underwater

Your dress hides your shape
Mind over matter
A pliable wisdom

Leaves in the breeze
Shaking seasons from their sleep
It seems fleeting
But it stays in the mind forever
Starting where we finish
A short trip on a long night
A dark sky under a full moon


Thanks for anyfeed back. Im just trying (poorly) to write some songs on my own, so I really only have a few friends to ask for feedback, and they aren't anonymous people on a message board who I suspect will be more honest.


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