I've been writing a lot about a group of characters lately that I don't really understand. I'm not sure who they are or what they're up to, though it's obviously nothing good.
I'm really excited about putting the album together, once the story is over and told. Until then, I thought I'd just put up songs here as I finish them, for a little feedback.
Hm. I think overall it's really good. The lyrics are rather well written, too, although it's hard for me to connect with them entirely without knowing the background. The only thing that I think should be reworked is the vocal melody and the guitar work in terms of versatility... nothing big, just small things that help keeping up the tension. But still, good idea, good song.
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Hm. I think overall it's really good. The lyrics are rather well written, too, although it's hard for me to connect with them entirely without knowing the background.
Yeah, I think I'm going to keep delivering the songs into this thread as they are completed, until I get the story completely told. I put two more songs up in the original post. Unfortunately they're the only other ones recorded right now.
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