Like A Diane Court


The rain came in so quickly
All the animals awake
Awaiting moments fond of blue and red
Purple made in haste
A feeling of redemption
Tickled by a hope of that effervescent feeling
Love today, maybe gone tomorrow
But comes back as a slightly different being
With her pale skin and brightly colored eyes
She brings me to a softer place
There's war outside all walls
But even that cannot remove her from your space
Ivories touched and ears buzzed
From sounds that are meant to soothe
Words sung from Lords above
You're finding a way to make your groove
She's like a Diane Court
Collapsing into the arms around her lovers chest
The heat of the breath delicious
The silk in the feel of her breasts
You'd hope this moment wouldn't fade over silly things
But they soon will come
It all makes you appreciate her more
Whenever she wakes with you in the sun
One day forever you will find her at your side
You won't be looking at her as much
As she is the one who mostly spies
A smile will shatter dissonance
It will make jump for years
She's the heart, your lover, and wife
She's everything that you endear
So sing her songs that make her feel so free and so loved
You'll be remembered one day for making her the queen
And holding above yourself, for her, your love.

I liked a bunch.

the only problem i had was this line

Tickled by a hope of that effervescent feeling

i didn't think it flowed that well with the other lines aorund it. mabye cause effervescents too big a word or something